Hello bloggers today I am going to show you some instructional writing. This will teach you how to pass a soccer ball.
Kia ora, I am a student at Marshland School, Welcome - Haere Mai. This is a place where I will be able to share my learning with you. Please note my work may include spelling or other errors because some of it will be my first drafts. I would like to get your feedback - comments, thoughts, questions and ideas to help me Learn Create Share.
Hello bloggers today I am going to show you some instructional writing. This will teach you how to pass a soccer ball.
To support my learning I ask you to comment as follows:
1. Something positive - Begin with a greeting. Talk about something you like about what I have shared.
2. Thoughtful - A comment that will mean something to me to let me know you read/watched or listened to what I had to say. - use any language.
3. Something helpful - Give me some ideas for next time or ask me a question.
Encourage me to make another post.
Kia ora Levi, I am pleased you blogged about your instructional writing, its really important to not leave out any steps!If we are back at school next week I will show you how to embed a doc and change the width and height so it is easier to read. Did you get a friend to try out your instructions?
ReplyDeletehi Mrs kerin
Deleteno I have not asked a friend to try but after lock down I will.
levi
Kia-ora Levi,
ReplyDeleteThis instructional writing looks great and I'm glad you did it on something you are passionate about!
You should use this writing and read out the instructions out to Mum or Dad to see if they can follow your instructions.
Miss Carr
hi miss carr
Deleteyes I will as soon as I can thanks for the idea
levi